Producers: Andrea Cornwell, Leah Clarke and Adam Ackland Director: Dylan Southern Screenplay: Dylan Southern Cast: Benedict Cumberbatch, Richard Boxall, Henry Boxall, Eric Lampaert, Vinette Robinson, Sam Spruell, Leo Bill, Lesley Molony, Garry Cooper, Claire Cartwright and David Thewlis Distributor: Briarcliff Entertainment
Grade: C
Dylan Southern has attempted a difficult task in adapting Max Porter’s 2015 debut novel “Grief is the Thing with Feathers,” a highly literary composite of poetry and prose, for the screen. Though Enda Walsh’s one-man stage version, which premiered in Dublin in 2018 and was repeated in London and New York the following year with Cillian Murphy, was very favorably received, cinema is quite a different medium, and Porter’s verbal somersaults and Walsh’s theatricality have given way to a literalism that renders what was powerful on the page and, from the critical reaction, the boards faintly ridiculous. Some significant plot tweaks further undermine the impact. The result is an ambitious effort, but one that falls short of what the makers obviously hoped to achieve.
One of the changes Southern has made involves jettisoning explicit mention of Ted Hughes, the British poet whose 1970 poetry collection “Crow: From the Life and Songs of the Crow” was the obsession of the protagonist in the novel, who was writing a book about him. Here Dad (Benedict Cumberbatch) is an artist, not a writer, and he’s working on illustrations for a graphic novel prominently featuring a crow when his wife (Claire Cartwright) suddenly dies, leaving him not only a widower but a single parent to two boisterous young boys (brothers Richard Boxall and Henry Boxall). Their mother appears only in occasional flashbacks.
In the first of the four chapters, called after him, Dad is obviously devastated by his loss, and despite attempts to help from his late wife’s best friend Amanda (Vinette Robinson), his brother Paul (Sam Spruell) and a therapist (Leo Bill), his depression deepens, and he finds it difficult to deal with his rambunctious sons. Then the crow enters, initially as a bird that peers in from the window and then crashes into the glass. When Dad goes outside to investigate, the bird enters through the open door and takes up residence inside.
And the crow morphs into a huge, towering presence, played by Eric Lampaert in a scraggly feathered outfit and voiced in guttural tones by David Thewlis. The creature is a metaphor for the grief Dad is suffering, or to speak in psychological terms a projection of his inner turmoil, but also a menacing figure that berates Dad for his inadequacies and seems to possess him when he rages at the children rather than comforting them or engages in cawing in frenzied, contorted quasi-dance. In this second chapter, “Boys,” the youngsters remark on how Dad has split into two different people.
But as is suggested in the third chapter “Crow,” the creature, real or hallucinatory, is actually a force for healing through tough treatment, particularly when it takes a physically protective stance against a truly malignant force that appears in the final section of the piece, the “Demon,” i.e. despair, which attempts first to weasel its way into the house and then enters by force.
Though Southern attempts to provide occasional breaks from the claustrophobic feel of the film—an occasional exterior scene outside the messy household, a visit to the late wife’s parents (Lesley Malony and Garry Cooper)—even here the atmosphere is suffocating, a tone accentuated by the boxy Academy format in which the film is shot by cinematographer Ben Fordesman, the cramped production design of Susie Davies and the gloomy lighting. And although Fordesman and editor George Cragg try to give the Crow a frightening effect through sharp cutting and changing perspectives, the figure never loses the look of a tall man lumbering about in the ungainly costume designed by Conor O’Sullivan and realized by Sophie O’Neill. A moody score by Zebedee C. Budworth and complementary sound design supervised by Joakim Sundström aren’t enough to compensate.
Cumberbatch’s commitment nearly does, however. His performance, to be sure, is often set to an eleven on a scale of one to ten in emotional terms, but there’s no question that he enlivens the material. While this isn’t a one-man effort as Murphy’s was on stage, it comes close, since none of the other humans make much of an impression, not even the Boxall brothers, though they’re certainly engaging enough. After Cumberbatch, however, it’s Thewlis, with his growling delivery, that you’re most likely to remember.
A story about the grief that follows from a terrible personal loss can’t help but carry a degree of power, but turning it into a kind of parable by embodying the grief in a hectoring creature like crow doesn’t work—at least not on the screen, where the literal portrayal of the symbol is more likely to amuse than enlighten or shock. Perhaps a more experimental approach would have been a better choice.